This paper is written in a first person perspective with a narrative focus to convey my own thought process in a life event that actually happened to me. I chose to keep all of the names private which I think really fit the setting and themes throughout the story. Often times people hide behind masks that may not be literal, which this story shows.(this actually just came to me when I was writing this post) This was a really difficult topic for me to broach as what happened here still haunts me. I made the wrong choice this particular night, and I often wish I could have done some things differently. That being said, it really felt good to write down some of the things that happened then. It helps to process some of the events that transpired and really shows how gullible I was but also how I learned a valuable life lesson.
The piece still needs a lot of work, to me the dialogue still feels a bit choppy and my scene writing isn't a 100% on point but it is definitely the right direction. I like the themes and motifs that are present so far and I plan on keeping the nonlinear aspect of the piece I feel like it really fits the mood. At the moment I feel the opener and end are solid but the overall meat of the paper could use some touching up. Let me know what you guys think and thanks for taking a look at my paper if you have a minute. Cheers.
0 Comments
Leave a Reply. |
AuthorShane Zandotti, Blogger extraordinaire. This is primarily to bolster my composition skills. Archives
April 2018
Categories |